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aka Caracia

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  • I was born on August 21
  • My occupation is adventuring
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  • I am going insane. I need to know what happens in Fates United! It just... ENDS.

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  • Are you still playing DV on your kindle?  I was able to get an android tablet but i have a real life friend that is still playing on the first kindle.  He has a small Park and the game will not allow the coop cave to be used but the rest still works so far.  He is available to be a Friend if you want.

    Peribee aka Mamil Elwing

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      • sigh*  Another Kindle user bites the dust.  He gave up and quit.  I am still sending a gem to your Park every day in case you are able to return.  I miss you!
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  • Hey A.R.C., how's it been? Hopefully you've been enjoying your break from chat. I kinda miss you, it's been a while and you're a fun person to hang out with on chat. Anyway, yeah, that's all I really had to say.

    -Beg

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  • Hi!  I just leveled up my new Polarian Dragon & i see you have an Antarian Dragon.  How does this work?  Is it polite to ask first or just choose from our friends list?

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    • Glad i looked again ... i found an android user!  Also wanted to tell you that i really like your Art and am enjoying The Great Escape.  Well done!   =^_^=

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    • Thanks! :)

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  • Hi, Caracia!  I'm the Kindle user you helped get back into her Park linked to fb.  I have an extra gem every day i would like to give to you ... would you consider friending me on fb so i could?

    =^_^=

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    • What is your fb? I will try to give some gifts in return if I get the chance or if one of my other gem friends quits, but I usually won't have the chance. Mine is https://www.facebook.com/speckles.gummywick

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    • No problem ... i already have friends gifting me and that extra gem just sits there every day.  Happy to have a friend to give it to.  Quick explanation, i love the Lord of the Rings & my fb name comes from the book before the trilogy, called The Silmarillion.  On fb i am Mamil Elwing.   =^_^=

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    • I have sent you a friend request.  No re-gifting needed ... just enjoy the gems and thanks again for helping me get my Park back in time for this Event!   =^_^=

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    • VERY NICE Park!  I quickly found all 3 Party Hats.   =^_^=

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  • Hey Arc,

    I'm not sure if you would be willing to edit the last paragraph of chapter 4, but here you go anyway. The first few sentences of the last paragraph seem a bit rushed, so I have a suggestion to smooth it out a bit. I know you asked for people to not comment on your grammar, but I don't think this technically counts as "grammar correction".

    BEFORE

    I swooped down to take Emma to a safer place than here. I searched through the forest, calling to her by all means, but there was no response. “This just has to be this difficult,” I groaned, “come on, Spica, I hope you're good at tracking.”


    AFTER

    I swooped down to take Emma to a safer place than in the midst of all the chaos, but she was nowhere to be found.  I searched through the forest, calling to her by all means, but there was no response. "This just had to be difficult," I groaned. “Come on, Spica, I hope you're good at tracking.”

    The stuff in bold is what I added/changed. I'm really sorry if this is wasting your time, I just had to get it off my chest. By the way, if you ever want a beta reader, I would gladly accept :)

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    • Thanks for helping me with grammar. :) I by now have learned to make up stories, but I'm still learning at write them in the best way possible.

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    • You're welcome. You are a very talented writer. Your sentences and paragraphs are very descriptive, and you are really good at describing setting to the readers.

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  • Each type of box also has a variable that goes along with it: Dragon var, Decoration var, Building var (and islands), and Habitat var. Let me know if you have questions, and thanks for helping!

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  • Hello, do you want to exchange game center names? Mine is cool-J. Thanks!

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    • Never mind, you're a kindle user. I saw your post on the gathering of roses page. You need friends to fill the equation for the prizes needed. I feel bad for you as kindle players are uncommon. I only have one friend gifting me. They should change that; don't you agree?

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    • but it's possible to get all he prizes without money

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    • I only have 3 friends; but they are all active and gift me every day. I think Kindle users can friend android users, by the way.

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    • Oh, okay that sound more comforting. I do care about other players by the way. ;)

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  • Want to do an art trade? I could draw one of your OC's, maybe both,and you could possibly add me in the Caracia meets. Just a suggestion. Please get back to me on that.

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    • Finished. Sorry if you think it was bad; this was mainly an experiment and is more of a doodle than anything else.

      ElementDragonARC

      Element Dragon doodle

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    • It doesnt look bad! compared to some art i've seen, its a masterpiece! ( not comparing to anyone on the wiki) most of my dragons are doodles anyways. I had a feeling in my gut that kuntiamos was derpy!

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  • I doodled Caracia the other day, and finally finished the picture :)
    CaraciaETPD
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